A pattering, sprinkling drizzle at first,
Becoming a torrent, a downpour that burst
From clouds of the fluffiest, puffiest kind,
Restoring my body, renewing my mind;
My heart, an oasis, is blessed from above,
To blossom and grow in the rain of your love.
—
A Quadrille for NaPoWriMo day 10, in response to the “drizzle” prompt from Mish at
dVerse.
Advertisements
Beautiful specially these lines:
My heart, an oasis, is blessed from above,
To blossom and grow in the rain of your love.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very nice meter and rhyme with a positive approach to rain as restoring, renewing and blessing whether metaphorical or real rain.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love, ‘rain of your love.’
LikeLike
Nice, clean poem. It runs clean, deep, and fine. An excellent piece to the prompt. Thank you.
LikeLike
A refreshing Quadrille, Crystal, from the sprinkling drizzle to the downpour!.
LikeLike
You’re rhyme and meter are flawless.
LikeLike
A delightful poem! It flows beautifully and the rhymes are natural, not forced 🙂
LikeLike
Oh, how I love this. The rhythm and rhyme are soothing.
LikeLike
I like the way the rain crescendos. The last two lines are especially beautiful.
LikeLike