We took leave sadly
With bags chock-full of sweetest memories
Of loving madly
And sure that you and I were meant to be.
We burned so badly
With deep desire for our destiny.
Succeeding gladly,
We went down swinging, then we rose up, free!
—
A Quadrille for De’s “up” prompt at
dVerse.
Usually I have too many words – that is, more than 44, and have to pair them down. This time I had 42 and had to conjure UP more! 🙂
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Oh, this bumps along in such a lovely fashion. So much rhythm and hope to be found here.
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Nice last line.
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So long as you rose up free, better for the ride!
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sweetness, bumps, flight, sounds like an adventuresome ride
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It’s an upward climb but, oh, the view from the top!
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Oh as long as you find such an end it’s all fine I think.
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All is well that ends well I guess!! ❤️
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Lots of twists and turns in life, but to rise up free at the end is good.
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Love this. Beautiful writing. Thank you so much.
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